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Correction for SilverFountainCrane by Usagi-Himeko Correction for SilverFountainCrane by Usagi-Himeko
Correction of :iconsilverfountaincrane:'s [link]

Made in Paint Tool SAI, arranged in PSE 8

Well, there was supposed to be a shading example of lighting with temperature, but it looked terrible so I dumped the idea. :P

I applied the shade with the lineart on top with the base colors on the bottom. Then I used the water tool to blend in.

As for shading, try shading on a darker background. You'll have a better view of shading. In a realistic perspective, the base colors are usually around the middle of the palette.

For a more natural look of the lines, i recommend the pen tool, and don't just use black ;) you can also use a dark gray, brown, etc.

I don't recommend using the Line work layer, where you can manipulate the line. It doesn't help your train your hand eye coordination and it doesn't usually do well with natural strokes since it slightly changes it when you draw.


I should be studying for the finals next month X)

If you need any questions, please let me know :)
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mishihime Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is a good redline. If there was one thing that could have been expanded upon it would probably be her arms, the shape is odd and the length was too until you corrected her overall proportions. This must have taken awhile especially with the coloring.
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Usagi-Himeko Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for your feedback. Oh no it did not take that much, since I figured out the proportions just from taking her head size. Do you mean that her left arm is not proportional with her right?

Suggestions are welcome :)
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SilverfountainCrane Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow!~ thanks alot very helpful!~^^ <3
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Usagi-Himeko Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :)
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